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Love of Siam 2: A Fan Made Sequel
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yep. 
walang napapala sa forced thingy hahaha that's how writing works 
walang napapala sa forced thingy hahaha that's how writing works
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yeah hahaha pero grabe ung mga writer talaga. haha with their deadlines,... arghh haha
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true that. hahaha i used to write for our school paper nung hs hirap pag pilit hahahaha @_@
lalo na college. pero ewan for some reason pag rushed mga sinusulat ko, it gets higher grades most of the time... weird lang.
lalo na college. pero ewan for some reason pag rushed mga sinusulat ko, it gets higher grades most of the time... weird lang.
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hhahaha good for you then. haha buti ako walang pinoproblema nun 
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<<< loser much LOL
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because of what you pointed out, the mew-aex scene in tlos hahaha i revised something with the story
i was also thinking about what happens next:
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Aex nodded and went outside with Nine.
Nine: So what's the matter?
Aex: Well. It's about Mew and his-- our current situation.
Aex tells Nine about everything. Starting from the accident up to his agreement with Tong.
“Wow. That's a lot to take in. Are you sure you still want to do this? If you want to we could probably find a way around Tong.”, Nine smirks.
Aex: (smiles) Heh, if it were that easy we wouldn't even be having this conversation.
Aex takes a deep breath and puts on a determined face.
Aex: Yes I'm sure about this. It may hurt, tt will hurt, probably a lot, but if it's to see Mew happy. I'm gonna be fine, I'll endure anything.
Nine: Well, I got to hand it to you Aex. You've got guts and pretty soon they're gonna be all over the place (laughs). Just kidding. Come on let's go back inside. Enough of this depressing talk. Gotta keep a smile on that face alright?
Aex: Thanks Nine. Maybe you could also tell the others about this, so they don't bring up stuff about me and Mew.
Nine nods and stands behind Aex, putting his hands on Aex's shoulders pushing him in a playful way into the room. "I'm glad to still have my friends." is what Aex thought as he was entering the room with a big smile on his face. They went inside the room and joined their friends, teasing Mew and teasing each other, just like the old times. They couldn't stay very long because the doctor told them to let Mew rest. They said their goodbyes and they left, except for Aex of course.
Mew: Oh Aex. You're not leaving with them?
Aex: No. We don't have rehearsals anyway. We can't do it without our extremely skilled vocalist, Mew. I'd rather stay here, it's actually better than being at home.
Mew: (laughs) Thanks I guess, but you know I'll be sleeping in a little while. You don't really have to worry about leaving me alone, I'm used to it.
Aex: Why do you always think nobody cares for you Mew? I'm here you know.. I mean. Uhh you don't have to be used to being alone, because I'm here, we're here, your friends are here.
Mew smiles.
Mew: Thanks Aex. Thanks for being a great friend.
“You don't have to thank me, Mew. I'm happy to be your friend...”, Aex said as he looked away trying to hide the frown on his face.
Mew nodded. Deciding it was really better for Mew to take a rest, Aex took a deep breathe and stood up.
Aex: Uhhm, well, I guess a good friend will let you rest. So I'll go now. I'll be back soon ok?
“Yeah. Thanks again anyways. Careful out there Aex. You don't wanna end up like me. Trust me.”, Mew said with a laugh.
Aex patted Mew's shoulder lightly and said goodbye. He grabbed his stuff and left the room. He stopped right outside the door and sat on a chair. He was trying his hardest to hold his feeling back. It was very difficult and it hurt so much.
"Thanks for being a great friend huh?" he said to himself while shaking his head.
He leaned forward, head bent down, as tears started rolling down his cheeks. "What am I doing??? WHAT am I doing?!!!!" he thought to himself. He just shrugged and stood up. "This is for Mew. For the one person I love with all my being." he thought to himself. He wiped his tears and went home.
i was also thinking about what happens next:
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- fast forward to after one week. Mew was given the clearance to go home and rest at home... tapos uuwi na sinundo siya ni aex pero nagulat si mew kasi he was expecting tong. tong arrives, tapos magpaparaya nanaman si aex. what you think?
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expresswhatsinside wrote:because of what you pointed out, the mew-aex scene in tlos hahaha i revised something with the story
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Aex nodded and went outside with Nine.
Nine: So what's the matter?
Aex: Well. It's about Mew and his-- our current situation.
Aex tells Nine about everything. Starting from the accident up to his agreement with Tong.
“Wow. That's a lot to take in. Are you sure you still want to do this? If you want to we could probably find a way around Tong.”, Nine smirks.
Aex: (smiles) Heh, if it were that easy we wouldn't even be having this conversation.
Aex takes a deep breath and puts on a determined face.
Aex: Yes I'm sure about this. It may hurt, tt will hurt, probably a lot, but if it's to see Mew happy. I'm gonna be fine, I'll endure anything.
Nine: Well, I got to hand it to you Aex. You've got guts and pretty soon they're gonna be all over the place (laughs). Just kidding. Come on let's go back inside. Enough of this depressing talk. Gotta keep a smile on that face alright?
Aex: Thanks Nine. Maybe you could also tell the others about this, so they don't bring up stuff about me and Mew.
Nine nods and stands behind Aex, putting his hands on Aex's shoulders pushing him in a playful way into the room. "I'm glad to still have my friends." is what Aex thought as he was entering the room with a big smile on his face. They went inside the room and joined their friends, teasing Mew and teasing each other, just like the old times. They couldn't stay very long because the doctor told them to let Mew rest. They said their goodbyes and they left, except for Aex of course.
Mew: Oh Aex. You're not leaving with them?
Aex: No. We don't have rehearsals anyway. We can't do it without our extremely skilled vocalist, Mew. I'd rather stay here, it's actually better than being at home.
Mew: (laughs) Thanks I guess, but you know I'll be sleeping in a little while. You don't really have to worry about leaving me alone, I'm used to it.
Aex: Why do you always think nobody cares for you Mew? I'm here you know.. I mean. Uhh you don't have to be used to being alone, because I'm here, we're here, your friends are here.
Mew smiles.
Mew: Thanks Aex. Thanks for being a great friend.
“You don't have to thank me, Mew. I'm happy to be your friend...”, Aex said as he looked away trying to hide the frown on his face.
Mew nodded. Deciding it was really better for Mew to take a rest, Aex took a deep breathe and stood up.
Aex: Uhhm, well, I guess a good friend will let you rest. So I'll go now. I'll be back soon ok?
“Yeah. Thanks again anyways. Careful out there Aex. You don't wanna end up like me. Trust me.”, Mew said with a laugh.
Aex patted Mew's shoulder lightly and said goodbye. He grabbed his stuff and left the room. He stopped right outside the door and sat on a chair. He was trying his hardest to hold his feeling back. It was very difficult and it hurt so much.
"Thanks for being a great friend huh?" he said to himself while shaking his head.
He leaned forward, head bent down, as tears started rolling down his cheeks. "What am I doing??? WHAT am I doing?!!!!" he thought to himself. He just shrugged and stood up. "This is for Mew. For the one person I love with all my being." he thought to himself. He wiped his tears and went home.
i was also thinking about what happens next:
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lol haha nakakahilo pag binbuksan ko ung post with the story nkakaduling
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yeah ok un. haha tapos eksena pa dun. kakatok si aex. tapos pagbukas ng gate/door ni mew. sasabihin nya "TONG! Oh. Sorry. Hi Aex!" or something like that .. ouch haha
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haha yes! imma try and write that part. lol..
nakakahilo ba? haha sorry!
nakakahilo ba? haha sorry!
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haha it's not your fault na nakakahilo. haha dapat pala ginawa ko separate posts.. para madaling i-edit. WAHAHAH takte.h haha ang DAMING WORDS XD nkakahilo hahah! nkakahirap pang hanapin nung mga formatting stuff ahahaha
GO KAYA MO YAN WAHAHAHAHAHA wala padin creativity ko eh haha
GO KAYA MO YAN WAHAHAHAHAHA wala padin creativity ko eh haha
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i actually have everything color coded in a word file... hahaha wala lang.. just sharing LOL
hahaha wala lang.. just sharing LOL
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in a word file..? ms word? haha kahit na.. pag nilagay mo sa forum un. walang kasamang (color=red) or stuff .. haha 
nakakalukong hanapin. lalo na pag nagloloko. kunwari na dodoble sya haha well anyway haha cge ikaw na mag compile haha ! i ppublish natin toh. softbound wahaha joke
nakakalukong hanapin. lalo na pag nagloloko. kunwari na dodoble sya haha well anyway haha cge ikaw na mag compile haha ! i ppublish natin toh. softbound wahaha joke
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softbound ftw! hahahaha XD hmmm i have a suggestion, if okay na tayo sa parts, let's make it one color nalang para di nakakalito. what ya think? if we add stuff that's when we use our assigned colors nalang...
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haha anu kasi eh. haha para makita nila who contributed what haha lalang
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hahaha cge fine, let's stick to that nalang XD
XD
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this seriously needs to be updated. i'll try later haha
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mack!! chapter 3 O_O
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A week has passsed by. Mew has been given clearance to go home. It was a painful week for Aex, seeing Mew and Tong happy together and pretending to be just a friend. Regardless of the hurt he had to go through and the tears he shed, he knew that it was only the beginning. Mew still doesn't remember what role Aex plays in his life. Mew still doesn't remember the love they had for each other, but Aex had to stand firm. He vowed that he would get Mew back no matter what. And so, Tong and Aex brought Mew home. Aex had to make sure that all of their stuff were hidden from Mew, as to keep his promise to Tong as well.
Mew: Wow. I feel like I haven't been here in ages!
Aex: Yeah you haven't been in for a week. There's dust everywhere.
Mew: I can see that. I'll just take care of it some other time I still feel a little bit tired.
Tong: You should rest Mew. Remember what the doctor said. You should take it easy.
Mew: Yes, I will.
Aex: I guess we'll leave you to rest for now.
Tong: Yeah we should. See you tomorrow Mew.
As Aex and Tong were leaving. Mew grabbed Tong's hand and said.
Mew: Please stay, Tong. Please stay here a little longer.
Aex was stopped with what he heard. He turned around and saw Mew's eyes. He saw pleading eyes, he saw eyes that don't see anything else but Tong. He clenched his fists in an attempt to ignore the aching pain in his heart. He knows that Mew really does love Tong, but to see it with his own two eyes. To see how much Mew does love Tong. It brings excrutiating pain to his heart. His throat was beginning to ache and he knew any moment from now tears would run down his face. He had to stop, he had to leave. And without further delay, he said goodbye and slowly walked away. "I shouldn't be sad. I'm glad to see Mew that happy again. That's the reason why I'm doing this." he thought to himself as he disappeared into the darkness of the night.
Back at Mew's house. Mew saw worry in Tong's face and he quickly asked.
Mew: Is anything wrong? Don't you want to stay here with me?
Was what he said while arranging his face to look like a cute puppy begging for more treats. Tong chuckled, smiled and said.
Tong: Heh, no there's nothing wrong and of course I want to stay here with you. You know I always want to be by your side.
Mew: What's with the face then?
Tong took Mew's hand and placed it on his cheek.
Tong: What's wrong with this face? -he smirked-
Mew felt that his face was going red and immediately looked down.
Mew: Nope! N-nothing's wrong.
Tong held Mew's face with his hand and lifted it up so they were looking at each other eye to eye.
Tong: See this face? It's all yours.
Mew fell silent as his face turned red. He could feel his chest pound going "boom boom boom boom". Just looking at Tong's eyes froze him. Tong held him closer and he got flustered. Tong placed gently lay his finger on Mew's lips asking him to not say anything.
Tong: Ssssh. Don't say anything. Just close your eyes.
Mew: Ummm.. Ok?
Mew could feel the pounding getting stronger like never before. He could feel tiny sweat droplets going down the side of his face. He felt a hand brush his hair to the side. The hand glided through his cheek going to his chin which tilted it a little bit upward. He felt another sensation at the back of his neck. It was Tong's hand too. And just like any other love story. He could feel Tong getting closer, he could feel Tong's breathing.
He felt Tong take his hand and he felt a strong beating sensation coming from where his hand was placed. It was Tong's heart, beating ever so strongly. Like a kid beating hard on a bass drum. Then without warning. Tong placed his lips on his.
Time stopped. It was the best sensation ever. He couldn't explain how good it felt. All he could see were fireworks, he felt butterflies. He just let the moment stay. He savored it, but then the lips moved away. He crunched up his face and stared at Tong like a kid who got his toy nabbed away.
Tong: Why are you staring at me like that?
Mew: Do you really want me to answer that?
Tong: Was it bad? -he frowned-
Mew: What?! No! Could it have been bad if I do this?
He grabbed Tong's face and gave him a quick smack on the lips.
Tong: H-hey! Once a day only! -he laughed and stuck out his tongue-
Mew: Whaaaaaa--
Before he could even finish talking. Tong immediately kissed his lips again. Tong leaned back and stared at Mew for a second. He laughed and said.
Tong: I was only kidding of course! And based from that expression of yours I bet you liked it.
Mew: Hmmmmm. No not really.
Tong kissed Mew again, and again and again and again until Mew gently placed his hand on Tong's face to cover it.
Mew: Ok! Ok! I really liked it! Happy now?
Tong: Very, but seriously. These lips are yours to kiss whenever you want.
Mew: You promise?
Tong: I promise!
Tong held Mew and hugged him so tight. Then Tong positioned his lips by Mew's ear and gently whispered.
Tong: I love you, Mew.
Mew: I love you too, Tong.
to be continued...
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wahahaha i love the
part!
i'll read it in full later nice job!
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- boom boom boom boom
part!
i'll read it in full later
nice job!
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expresswhatsinside wrote:wahahaha i love the
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part!
i'll read it in full later
haha lol thanks
okiiiee
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i read it na.. nakakahiya naman kasi when i check my compiled copy, I see mostly red stuff 
as if parang it's all your work 
haha my creativity comes on and off eh... even worse i might have lost it :p
as if parang it's all your work haha my creativity comes on and off eh... even worse i might have lost it :p
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btw ito na idea ko for the next:
i know it sucks :p
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- Tong spends the night at Mew's. Mew wakes up with weird noises of someone cooking in the kitchen, so Mew goes down to check what's happening - he sees aex cooking. Aex greets him joyfully until tong comes down. Tong worried when he woke up without Mew by his side. Aex finishes cooking and decides to leave when Mew stopped him. Mew asks aex to join them for breakfast, aex declines. Mew tells Aex to bring the band and aod (wag na tayo gumawa ng bagong character haha) later that afternoon for a surprise announcement. Mew then tells the band they have a new song. everybody finds it great. Aod prepares the band for their comeback and asks mew to write more songs.
i know it sucks :p
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expresswhatsinside wrote:btw ito na idea ko for the next:
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i know it sucks :p
no its not, its rocks...
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awww thanks nonez! haha i'm working on it...
haha i'm working on it...
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kinilig nga me sa idea mo for the next storyline
iniimagine ko ang mga bawat eksena...
iniimagine ko ang mga bawat eksena...
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expresswhatsinside wrote:i read it na.. nakakahiya naman kasi when i check my compiled copy, I see mostly red stuff
lol anu ka ba . wala un dun. haha may colors lang yan para pag may something to change alam na agad kung sino kakausapin.. xD feeling ko kasi magiging tatlo tayong gumagawa (kasama si imman pero he's still not here) para mas madaling i-reference. xD tska anu ka ba. you help din naman kaya, you give lots of good ideas.
hahah parang ikaw ung palaman ako ung tinapay? or the other way around? or was that a really bad metaphor? XDexpresswhatsinside wrote:btw ito na idea ko for the next:
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i know it sucks :p
ok yan ok yan! XD it's good kaya!!! :p
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