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Ate Chan!!!
grin_minded27- Pchy's Lover
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aba nagaalisan nanaman kyo ah?!
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chanrakter wrote:Ako rin.
Got to go na rin!
Byers!
nytz!
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Hey guys! I was hoping you could do a little favor for me..
Remember when Chan made a reply in the Ask a Question thread, about the storyline with an August member? Well, I made one.. But I got a little overboard, and now it's slowly becoming a short story! xD
I would appreciate if you read Chapter 1. Your feedback is very much encouraged! I hope you guys like it. It's quite mushy and all.. But hey, I'm quite a romantic myself.
Thanks everyone!
Note: I hope you guys won't be too hard on me! I just got bit by the writing bug again, after quite a while. So I still have to edit everything and all that. ^^
Remember when Chan made a reply in the Ask a Question thread, about the storyline with an August member? Well, I made one.. But I got a little overboard, and now it's slowly becoming a short story! xD
I would appreciate if you read Chapter 1. Your feedback is very much encouraged! I hope you guys like it. It's quite mushy and all.. But hey, I'm quite a romantic myself.
Thanks everyone!
Note: I hope you guys won't be too hard on me! I just got bit by the writing bug again, after quite a while. So I still have to edit everything and all that. ^^
- Spoiler:
- Genre: A romantic film/story.
Setting: Italy.
Characters:
Suchin, a carefree tourist who insists that her purpose for going to Italy is to experience the Carnivale. The real purpose? To try and forget the pain of a former love.
Non, an Italian Studies major at the American University of Rome whose final project/thesis is a photo essay on Italy. He lives with his father (his mother Dara died when he was 5, doing a humanitarian project in Africa when rebels captured the tribe she was helping)
________________________________________________________Capitolo Uno - Venezia
Chapter One – Venice
2 weeks before Ash Wednesday, it is Carnivale di Venezia - Carnival of Venice.
At the height of the Carnivale, Non is taking photos as the masked men and women traverse the streets of Venice. He revels at the colors and the elaborate costumes. A flash of gold catches his eye. Seemingly alone in the middle of the revelers is a girl in a black gown with gold brocade and details. He snaps a photo. They meet eyes, and he feels a pang of passion light up within him. Suddenly the girl runs out of the chaos and into an alley. Non follows her, with a fervent desire to find her, his mystery girl with the lovely almond eyes that seemed to pierce through his own.
The girl runs through bridges, streets, alleys.. until she finds a dead end with nowhere to go. Non catches up to her, and sees her against the wall, her hands trembling. He goes up to her slowly and calmly and in his mellow voice filled the secluded alley..
"All I wanted was a photo. I didn't mean to scare you.."
The girl looked at him, curious, as if searching for something. She removed her mask, and held it with gloved hands.
"Oh.. I see. I'm sorry for running. I thought you were.."
"..a bad man?"
said Non as he finished her sentence.
"Yes, sir.."
she replied with a bowed head.
"Well.. Can we start over? Hi. My name is Non, and I'm here taking photos for my project at the American University of Rome. I'm an Italian Studies major, and I've always wanted to go to Carnivale.."
The girl replied, the shakiness in her voice abating,
"Hello, Non. I'm Suchin. I came here a few days ago, and my purpose for being here is to experience Carnivale.."
The boy and the girl's conversation carries on, and Suchin even forgets to return to participate in the festivites. They walk along the less crowded streets, talking about everything that came to their minds. From the mundane happiness of ice cream to pondering on life's mysteries, the day seems to breeze by. From traversing the Rialto Bridge to tea and cakes at the Caffé Florian, the two seemed as if they knew each other from the very start..
..and it all started with boy's glance into a girl's eyes in the middle of Carnivale.
blissinabox- Pchy's Lover
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wow marianner!!!! 
galing.. sana gumawa ka ng own topic para dito..para di matabunan ng mga posts...
galing.. sana gumawa ka ng own topic para dito..para di matabunan ng mga posts...
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oo nga
marianner- Certified Pchyholic
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Okay
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blissinabox wrote:wow marianner!!!!
Haha, uy thanks ha..
Wala pa nga lang title. xD
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Have to sleep na po pla!!! Gud nyt pchynaticx!!!
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And also, g'nyt WHP!!!!
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Hala, wala ng tao? O_O
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andito pa ako..
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bye guys
gtg
nyt!
gtg
nyt!
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blissinabox wrote:bye guys
gtg
nyt!
ako nalang tao.
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hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
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duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
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chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
oh I thought you were here for me
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duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
oh I thought you were here for me
similar ballpark., hahah
actually i have to report to school today., something to do with updating my medical records.,
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chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
oh I thought you were here for me
similar ballpark., hahah
actually i have to report to school today., something to do with updating my medical records.,
oh ok, well...I will let you browse on whp then...I don't want to hold you back with my dirty talk...lol
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duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
oh I thought you were here for me
similar ballpark., hahah
actually i have to report to school today., something to do with updating my medical records.,
oh ok, well...I will let you browse on whp then...I don't want to hold you back with my dirty talk...lol
awww... so you're tired of me already???
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chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:hi chiru!
you are here so early today. what is the occasion?
i was actually waiting for you... not!!!
nope i tried to wake up early today to avoid another splitting headache.,
oh I thought you were here for me
similar ballpark., hahah
actually i have to report to school today., something to do with updating my medical records.,
oh ok, well...I will let you browse on whp then...I don't want to hold you back with my dirty talk...lol
awww... so you're tired of me already???
lol...I thought you were busy or something
fine, I was trying to be nice by not torturing you...but I guess you like pain then
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duplex wrote:
lol...I thought you were busy or something
fine, I was trying to be nice by not torturing you...but I guess you like pain then
I'll give myself an hour here before going to school., those medical officers can wait.,
Is it just me, or are you implying something "green" on the "pain" remark???
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chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:
lol...I thought you were busy or something
fine, I was trying to be nice by not torturing you...but I guess you like pain then
I'll give myself an hour here before going to school., those medical officers can wait.,
Is it just me, or are you implying something "green" on the "pain" remark???
oh ok, that is plenty of time...lol
pain = showing me your handsome face
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duplex wrote:chiruruzu wrote:duplex wrote:
lol...I thought you were busy or something
fine, I was trying to be nice by not torturing you...but I guess you like pain then
I'll give myself an hour here before going to school., those medical officers can wait.,
Is it just me, or are you implying something "green" on the "pain" remark???
oh ok, that is plenty of time...lol
pain = showing me your handsome face
nah, i don't like pain anyways... tough luck my friend.,
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chiruruzu wrote:
nah, i don't like pain anyways... tough luck my friend.,
why not? I heard that you were hot
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