I'm sorry, I don't enjoy writing artistic literary works. I was trained to write in research format, wherein rule is, "the simpler, the better". That is for I believe it is more important to be able to relay the content to the readers, rather than making them look up to the dictionary every now and then.
But you're really improving! I like it~ you start to sound more artistic, now I'm really excited for the chapter under the collaborative effort of silent pen and ateneo forever ^__^