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    Frustrated August Scriptwriter!

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    Post by chanrakter April 18th 2009, 11:46 pm

    julipych wrote:
    chanrakter wrote:
    marianner wrote:Here's the continuation of Chapter 1: Venice.

    I decided that the first one I posted would be some kind of prelude or something. Very Happy

    Hope you guys like it!

    Spoiler:

    Good job yet again!

    *gets inspired to develop hers*

    wow! suchin! wonderful....

    *drools around*
    you're inspiring me actually... hehe
    it makes me wanted to develop the writer in me... hehe yes

    Love you, my talented friend!
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    Post by marianner April 18th 2009, 11:49 pm

    I love you too! Smile

    Suchin rak Pailin mai! เพื่อนถาวร!
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    Post by chiruruzu April 18th 2009, 11:53 pm

    marianner wrote:Here's the continuation of Chapter 1: Venice.

    I decided that the first one I posted would be some kind of prelude or something. Very Happy

    Hope you guys like it!

    Spoiler:

    Now, I am definitely enthralled with your writing skills suchin., Again, I love the imagery., You write with such amazing picturesque style Very Happy

    And I definitely notice the effort of multi-layering the story into different angles., a definite plus for me.,

    A word of caution though, you have to stick with the different layers that you have created in order to continue the chronological order of the narrative., but I'm sure you will...

    Go for the gold suchin., Embrace your gift., Can't wait for the next chapter... there will be, right?! cheers cheers cheers
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    Post by chanrakter April 18th 2009, 11:55 pm

    marianner wrote:I love you too! Smile

    Suchin rak Pailin mai! เพื่อนถาวร!

    Aww! Chan rak ter, chee puak!
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    Post by chanrakter April 18th 2009, 11:56 pm

    chiruruzu wrote:
    marianner wrote:Here's the continuation of Chapter 1: Venice.

    I decided that the first one I posted would be some kind of prelude or something. Very Happy

    Hope you guys like it!

    Spoiler:

    Now, I am definitely enthralled with your writing skills suchin., Again, I love the imagery., You write with such amazing picturesque style Very Happy

    And I definitely notice the effort of multi-layering the story into different angles., a definite plus for me.,

    A word of caution though, you have to stick with the different layers that you have created in order to continue the chronological order of the narrative., but I'm sure you will...

    Go for the gold suchin., Embrace your gift., Can't wait for the next chapter... there will be, right?! cheers cheers cheers

    Very, very true! Pursue that gift mai!
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    Post by julipych April 18th 2009, 11:57 pm

    chanrakter wrote:
    chiruruzu wrote:
    marianner wrote:Here's the continuation of Chapter 1: Venice.

    I decided that the first one I posted would be some kind of prelude or something. Very Happy

    Hope you guys like it!

    Spoiler:

    Now, I am definitely enthralled with your writing skills suchin., Again, I love the imagery., You write with such amazing picturesque style Very Happy

    And I definitely notice the effort of multi-layering the story into different angles., a definite plus for me.,

    A word of caution though, you have to stick with the different layers that you have created in order to continue the chronological order of the narrative., but I'm sure you will...

    Go for the gold suchin., Embrace your gift., Can't wait for the next chapter... there will be, right?! cheers cheers cheers

    Very, very true! Pursue that gift mai!

    and keep on inspiring people like me! hehe yes
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    Post by marianner April 19th 2009, 12:08 am

    @Chiru - What do you mean by sticking to the layers? Enlighten me, won't you? Smile

    Thank you everyone, I really appreciate your feedback. It really pushes me to improve and to write even more! After all, writing is not just a requirement or a hobby or a mere pastime, but a PASSION. Smile

    Just to let you all know, their next destination will be Milan! (I really looked at a map of Italy, I figured Milan would be a realistic place to go due to its proximity to Venice.

    Spoiler:

    Venice is in the region of Veneto, while Milan is in the region of Lombardy (Lombardia). Smile

    YES, I do research for this story. Very Happy
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    Post by chiruruzu April 19th 2009, 12:11 am

    marianner wrote:@Chiru - What do you mean by sticking to the layers? Enlighten me, won't you? Smile

    Thank you everyone, I really appreciate your feedback. It really pushes me to improve and to write even more! After all, writing is not just a requirement or a hobby or a mere pastime, but a PASSION. Smile

    Just to let you all know, their next destination will be Milan! (I really looked at a map of Italy, I figured Milan would be a realistic place to go due to its proximity to Venice.

    Spoiler:

    Venice is in the region of Veneto, while Milan is in the region of Lombardy (Lombardia). Smile

    YES, I do research for this story. Very Happy

    what i mean is that you have to always remember to supplement the story of the different sub-plots that you have made., in this way no character will be put to an immediate dismissal. Plus, the readers can easily make the connections between them.,

    but overall, go for the gold., the story is very nice., Very Happy
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    Post by chanrakter April 19th 2009, 12:47 am

    chiruruzu wrote:
    marianner wrote:@Chiru - What do you mean by sticking to the layers? Enlighten me, won't you? Smile

    Thank you everyone, I really appreciate your feedback. It really pushes me to improve and to write even more! After all, writing is not just a requirement or a hobby or a mere pastime, but a PASSION. Smile

    Just to let you all know, their next destination will be Milan! (I really looked at a map of Italy, I figured Milan would be a realistic place to go due to its proximity to Venice.

    Spoiler:

    Venice is in the region of Veneto, while Milan is in the region of Lombardy (Lombardia). Smile

    YES, I do research for this story. Very Happy

    what i mean is that you have to always remember to supplement the story of the different sub-plots that you have made., in this way no character will be put to an immediate dismissal. Plus, the readers can easily make the connections between them.,

    but overall, go for the gold., the story is very nice., Very Happy

    Very, very nice!

    And I must commend you on researching for your writing! It shows your dedication to bringing your characters to life!
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    Post by marianner May 23rd 2009, 7:07 pm

    Hi guys! Sorry it took so long to update.. I've been having writer's block which absolutely sucks xD Chapter 2 isn't finished, in fact, it is still in progress. But I'd like to know what you all think of it so far. So.. here it is. I hope you like it, and I appreciate your comments and feedback. yes

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